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« Thread Started on Jun 28, 2007, 10:30am » | |
This site is an intermidiate role playing site. For those of you who don't know what that means, I made this guide. It is still in progress at this point, please be patient as I complete it!! 
Intermediate means I, as well as the other members and staff, don't like entire threads like this:
Person 1: "Hi Clara," nina said,
Person 2: Hey nina. she said back to her.
That's cheap and lazy. If that's how you roleplay, them find someone else to roleplay with. Seriously. Each of your posts should be AT LEAST 5 sentences. That doesn't include dialouge, or OCC.
Is what you should take up these five non-dialougue sentences with is describing things like where they are,(mountains, plains ect.) Weather (Rain, snow, sunny, windy) your charecter's current appearance. (When I say appearance I don't mean she has gray fur, I mean windblown, sparkling eyes, dirty fur, ect.)
If you do that, you can turn this:
Nina stared into the distance. Into this:
Nina stared frustratedly into the distance, her eyes dull. Her fur hadn't been groomed in days, and it showed in the way her fur was missplaced and each strand was weighed down with dirt. The wind blew powerfully into the clearing, strong enough to blow a smaller wolf of their feet. But Nina stood there, unmoving, the wind not even registering in her brain. Nothing had made sense to her, not since Midnoght had dissapeared. Why would he leave her? He said he loved her, didn't he?
That was shortish for me, but it gets the point across to you. I gave a basic description of the weather, said how Nina loked at the time of post, and threw in a statement about her feelings! I only did a little about her location, but I could've added a lot more!
If you want to know more, feel free to message me!! Or, you could make a post on the roleplaying practice board, where other members will help you improve upion your post! But, if you're not willing to do your part in improving your roleplay and getting it to this level, then please, do all the other members a favor and leave.
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Nina will be getting a little signature thing soon, I just gotta find a picture I like... |
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